Target Audience Feedback

"I think the running scene could be more effective"
"Did he smile as he fell? I don't think that was very good"
We plan to re film the first scene because we were told multiple times that it was not effective.

"I like the scene where the pill falls in the water"
This scenes editing worked successfully which is good because it took the most time to edit.

"His consciousnesses were shown really clearly"
This confirmed that a possibly complex aspect of our sequence was still logical to our target audience.

"I'm confused"
"I don't understand"
This implies that our narrative is maybe too complex for some members of our audience and may need to be simplified.

"So the psychiatrist is drugging him, yeah?"
This individual had worked out our whole narrative after only the opening two minutes. This suggests that it would benefit our group to change our story arc because it would keep our audience interested.